And now I am in love with my laptop again and you will all be the recipients of my new eagerness to blather on and on just so I can use it. Hee! Malaise begone!
Here's another giveaway. Send me your favorite sentence* from a WIP. I will choose the one that I like best (I know this will be hard) and the winner will receive these:
*Or favorite exchange or passage. But short. I want impact from the fewest sentences possible.
*CLOSED* Thanks for playing!
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2008-07-18 11:34 pm (UTC)
2008-07-19 01:20 am (UTC)
2008-07-18 11:40 pm (UTC)
2008-07-19 01:21 am (UTC)
2008-07-19 01:39 am (UTC)
Matted brown hair, dirt-streaked and haggard face, a scraggly beard — they all belonged to a stranger. But those eyes … those warm green eyes. She knew them well.
2008-07-21 06:14 pm (UTC)
2008-07-19 02:07 am (UTC)
“He say you witch.”
Katya’s gaze snapped to the woman’s face. “How does he know?”
“He smell it on you.”
Katya sniffed and wished she could have taken a bath somewhere along the journey.
2008-07-19 03:19 am (UTC)
2008-07-21 06:14 pm (UTC)
Yours was a very close second!
2008-07-19 03:38 am (UTC)
From my temporarily shelved novel:
I look down and when I look up again, Sean’s expression shifts, like he has x-ray vision and can see through my clenched fist, can see the grades, can see through my skull and into my mind that is crunching the numbers in a futile attempt to recalculate the unexpected, can see into my heart and knows that it’s beating just a fraction of a hair faster when he looks at me the way he’s looking. Like he can see into my soul.
2008-07-21 06:15 pm (UTC)
Oooo, first person, present tense. Can't wait to see how it turns out.
2008-07-19 11:51 am (UTC)
From the first chapter of Blood Bound:
Blood Bound
2008-07-19 07:40 pm (UTC)
Re: Blood Bound
2008-07-19 11:42 pm (UTC)
But I like Grams's line better. :)
2008-07-21 06:15 pm (UTC)
This sounds fun! :)
2008-07-19 04:01 pm (UTC)
Jared snorted. Showering? Did the girl know they were going into the mountains? The very dirty mountains, where she would be traipsing through trees and leaves and mud, fighting for her life? And she was *showering?*
“I will never understand girls,” he complained to Jon, who laughed.
“Me neither. And we can hear that one’s thoughts. Still doesn’t make it a
any easier.”
“I’m glad I’m not the only one who thinks so,” Jared said irritably, settling back onto the couch.
Re: This sounds fun! :)
2008-07-21 06:15 pm (UTC)
Sounds fun!
2008-07-19 07:03 pm (UTC)
I rolled over and my face was wet. The smell churned my stomach and I threw up. Again. I was lying in vomit. Mine. It reeked of beer and whiskey. And urine soaked through my pajamas. "Aw damn."
Re: Sounds fun!
2008-07-21 06:15 pm (UTC)
Congrats on solving the techno problem!
2008-07-19 07:54 pm (UTC)
“Calm down, class. Girls! Please!” Mrs. Caldwell rushed down the aisle, her bat-wing arms flapping urgently and her canary yellow suit jacket bunched about her waist, the buttons winking like they knew how embarrassed she’d be when they popped off.
Re: Congrats on solving the techno problem!
2008-07-21 06:16 pm (UTC)
Excellent description!